Everything has two sides and the globalization is not the (exception). Our first thoughts about this topic include the process of global “McDonaldisation” and, generally speaking, (spreading) the one, American, (lifestyle) across the whole Globe. Firstly, I would try to concentrate on the positive aspects of globalisation. As far as economics is (concerned), institiutions like the Global Bank or IMF are always focused on developing the ?Third World’ and helping poor people to combat their life obstacles [through loans and donations]. Moreover, the world becomes an area of sharing the thoughts [e.g. philosophical or economical doctrines], which become (popular) due to lack of barriers. However, disadvantages of (globalization) are also widely known. Some people maintain that because of this process, the spirit of countries and nations rapidly (disappears). The integrity, established houndreds years ago is on the verge of collapse. Furthermore, there’s a strong lobby of communists who reckon, that the globalization indicates (uncontrolled) reign of capitalists and slave work of lower labour-class. We should never forget about detrimental impact of global investments on environment – green house effect or soar rains are (triggered) by globalization. To sum up, globalization has both positive and negative influence on our everyday life. I can’t agree with the popular statement that we should try to avoid being affected by it. However, we must not forget about our surroundings and local communities. They have (invaluable) values which should last forever. This essay is too short [233 words instead of mandatory 250] and that will be penalized. On the bright side, it covers the task and has a sound structure on essay level. The paragraphs are coherent and logically connected by linking words; the sentences are well-structured and the vocabulary is adequate. There were some inaccuracies, see comments underlined in blue. Overall, looks like a band 6 essay.
