I have been done a favor for my mom.It happened last week.When my mom made breakfast for me I saw she was listless,she yawned on the on.I didn't want she so tired so I decided make breakfast by myself.

 First I bought some milk and bread.Then I put them into the fridge.The following day I got up early and started make breakfast.Firstly,I took out them from firdge.Secondly,I staem bread and made milk be warm.Thirdly I fried a egg.The last step I put them into a plate and I enjoyed my breakfast.I felt very happy because I understand I should share some work with my parents.And I can make breakfast by myself.How happy am I!

 I am proud of myself with this things.It means I am be able to ease my parent's burden.My mom told me that I am really grow up!

Hi, Billy. You have written a good essay relating how you "indirectly" did a favor for your mother. However, you should put proper spacing between words and the punctuation marks that precede them. In addition, take note of all the words that were deleted, replaced, and/or added. When an action was done in the past, it should be in the past tense verb form.